Wednesday, October 13, 2010

In the Woods

I'm standing in the woods alone
My surroundings are unknown
 I'm scared out of my mind
While I'm in the woods blind
Questions are going through my head
While I'm wish  I was asleep in my bed
 I hear a door creak
And let out a little squeak
 I notice a sunlight stream
And realize it was just a dream





2 comments:

  1. That was very well written. A good twist at the end when you said "and realize it was just a dream." Very descriptive and great word choice.

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  2. Like Mai said I like the ending and how it was really a dream along.

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