Author's
Note: I wrote this piece expressing my thoughts toward the use and of
sweatshops. After learning about them in social studies I have thought a lot
about it and how I believe they are wrong. I also believe that it does no good
just to spread the news. one person can change it.
Can you imagine a
life where your daily salary is hardly enough to pay for one meal? Not an easy day either; a 16 hour, break free
day. I don't think anyone can imagine it until they have actually lived through
it. But why are people treated like this? For the people in countries like
Indonesia, this is their reality. Many people don't have a choice; they need
whatever job they can get just to stay alive.
Large companies such as, Nike, Wal-Mart, Disney World, Abercrombie, and
Apple use sweatshops so they can force
hard labor on people for extremely low wages.
In a way it is like slavery -- unfair and wrong.
America is supposed
to be the land of the free and the home of the brave. Treating people poorly in
sweatshops is going against that. Just
because they live in a different country, speak a different language , or have
less money than we do, does not give us the right to boss them around. People say we are helping them by giving them
jobs. Yes, we are providing jobs for them but we are also putting them in
danger with the working conditions. Also, they are not able to live off of the
wages they earn. Most don't have enough money to send their children to school.
How is their country ever going to have a good economy if their children aren't
even educated?
You could say it
isn't our fault their country is poor ; and it entirely is not. I believe we
play a contributing factor though. Is it so hard to pay these hard working
people minimum wage? Currently they are making less in one day then an average
American makes in an hour. We should be paying them what they deserve.
Put your self in
their shoes and take a look at the situation from a different point of view. We
should be putting sweat shops in the past and moving toward a considerate way
to still give these people jobs. A way were they can live off their wages, send
their children to school, and most importantly live in a safe and healthy place
to raise their families.
This is really good! There is nice voice and you use a creative way to both persuade and inform your audience on sweatshops. You could work a little on your word choice, using figurative language or advanced vocabulary to enhance the quality of you piece. I think that if you wanted to you could write a creative piece from the perspective of the sweatshop worker talking about the conditions that they are in. In the authors note you could reference it to this piece. Totally just a suggestion, but I think that would be really cool.
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